Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Writing the Uplifting Villain

The what? Can there be such a thing as an uplifting villain? Well, that's a tricky question.

In my mind, villains in a story should be clearly bad. Sure, they may have a tragic back-story or a conflicted heart, but in the end the villain should be the person you do not want to be. Obviously then, writing an evil villain is important to a epic story. But those villains are nasty things, and they have a way of not only causing trouble for the hero in the story, but also the writer and reader.

Maybe it's just me, but have you have discovered how easy ( and even a little fun) it is to write a villain? Sometimes, its frightening to see just how fiendish our minds can be. And as you're caught up in writing this antagonist, it can be all too tempting to go overboard in your descriptions of their evil doings.

I'm a follower of Christ, and it is my goal to write works that will not dishonor him and will give him glory. In that case, I wonder in dismay, should I even be writing about such evil people? But then I have to remember--villains can be in the story we're writing, because they're in our story. Evil is everywhere, and we have to deal with it. Some of the most terrible examples of evil I've found are in the Bible.

But one must be careful that the villain does not stumble the reader. I try not to write a villain with the idea of him or her being "cool." I don't want my readers to think being bad is "cool." Nor do I want to write a villain that is sooo bad, that I leave readers blinking and thinking "Why did I just read that?"

You can write a villain without being explicit in their insidious doings. In my opinion, it falls into the category "Less Is More."  Your reader can pick up the fact that this guy or girl is really bad stuff and is huge trouble for the protagonist without going into big descriptions.

Remember, as a writer, we are responsible for what we put into the imaginative windows of others. So be careful and thoughtful of what you write. It's a challenge. But don't let those nasty little villains get the worst of you! Send them to their literary doom!!! Mwahahaha! (Wait, was that an evil laugh? Ack, I think they're affecting me!)

By the way, if you're having trouble writing that dreadful antagonist, there is a blog called "Of Battles, Dragons, and Swords of Adamant"  by Gillian Adams, in which Ms. Adams has provided us with classes taking directly from the Academy of Ultimate Villainy! This link goes directly to  Gillian's posts on villainy .  If you have time, please read some of them. They are hilarious!

8 comments:

Unknown said...

Very good points, Hannah! I know for myself, I always try to write the villain multi-dimensional. So that means they do have two sides, 'good' and 'bad', but they are still 'evil'. How does this work? Like this:

I like to try to remind people through my stories that everyone has the capacity for evil ("we all have fallen short of the glory of God...") and that the difference between my protagonist and antagonist is not necessarily that one is better than the other, but that one follows a different path, a path of grace.

It's so easy to box villains in as merely villains, and to forget that, like us, they're human. Villains should both terrify and break our hearts, as well as warn us of the dangers of following their paths. I also like to split my types of villains into two: the redeemable, and irredeemable. There are people out there who will change from their evil ways, and I like to explore that journey (think Zuko in Avatar), and others who will never change, who are too embedded in their own selfish desires (think Zuko's father). I try to highlight the hope and grace included in the one and the sadness and misery of the other. Hopefully then readers can draw their own conclusions about good and evil and which path is the best. :)

Anyways, really interesting post, and hope to see more like it in the future!

Molly said...

Hee hee I love Gillian's blog! Thanks for sharing the link, I'm now following her! :D

Hannah said...

Oh, thank you so much for posting this, Beka! I completely agree with everything you say.

Villains are human (most of the time)and there's always a path that took them there. Anne Elisabeth Stengl's books are shining examples of that. Also Zuko. (By the way, a few months ago I would have had no idea who that was, but then my cousin showed the first two episodes to me. Love Zuko!)

Lately, I've been working on understanding the antagonists better. There is of course, the incarnation of BAD (like the Dragon) who features in "Moonscript". But in the sequel of "Moonscript" I explored a completely different antagonist--an aging, wealthy, human man who is convinced he will bring about world peace...and has some sneaky ways of doing so.

And then there's that extended grace. In one of my other stories, I took the challenge of not just showing a villain coming to grace in a side story, but writing that villain as main character!

Thank you so much for this wonderful post! I love your insight!

Molly said...

Upon further investigating other comments, I heard mention of Zuko...AHHHH!! I hope it's not spoilers, but later on his hair grows back and oh he's just my favorite out of all the characters I think. :D Did you know that there's a sequel to Avatar: The Last Airbender? Love it too! Korra is my favorite in that one.
Zuko is a great example of an evil villain; I'd never thought of putting a villain that way, they are always just evil. Mwuhaha! Ahem, where was I? Great thought, Beka! I'll store this in a new page I've started; Molly's Awesome Stolen Tips for Villains and Hereos.
Now, excuse me, I'm off to attend The School for Apprentice Villains.

Hannah said...

Ahh, Zuko's hair grows back? *sniff* I kind of liked it when he looked like the son of Aura Sing. He was just so intimidating that way. When you say a sequel, do you mean to the animated series or to the human movie?
Have a good time over at the School for Apprentice Villains!

Unknown said...

There's a spin-off animated series about the next avatar in the cycle after Aang, a young water tribe girl named Korra. (And I'm so glad you're into Avatar, Hannah--it's such a shining example of how to write amazing fantasy that makes you think about the real world in whole new ways!) I don't like Korra as much as the first series (she does some stupid stuff I can't yet forgive her for), but I think the artwork alone makes it worthy of you checking it out. Season 2 is supposed to release sometime this year, so I'm hoping it gets better!

And thanks, Molly! Glad it helps! :D

Hannah said...

Actually, I'm not sure I'm officially "into" Avatar. I thought the first two episodes were funny, and I talked over the series with my cousin who is a big fan. But now you've got me really curious about the series. I told my cousin to show me her favorite episode when next I visit her, so maybe I'll see more of it then. :)

Unknown said...

Gotcha. I hope you end up liking it! I won't say anything more so as not to affect your upcoming impressions. :)