Today, I thought that I would share an excerpt from my current work-in-progress with you all. It is called Moonscript. If you would like to learn more about it, you can check out this interview I did over at the lovely Anne Elisabeth Stengl's blog.
In this excerpt, my main character, 14-year old Tellie, is escaping from a prison through the sewer passages with her young friend Kelm, and the mysterious prisoner they have rescued, Errance. Enjoy.
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As they continued
on, they turned a corner and brilliant white burst in front of Tellie’s
vision. She gasped again, and covered her eyes. Spots squirmed under her
eyelids.
She heard Errance
swear softly, but she was too full of relief and exhaustion to say anything.
“Daylight,” Kelm
breathed. “It’s daylight.”
Before them, down
a steeper decline, was the exit of the passage. It was small and filled almost
to the top with water, but light showed through and reflected upon the water
into the darkness. They stumbled down
towards it.
But the current of
the water had become extremely strong, and all three of them struggled to stay
on their feet. Twenty paces away from the exit. Fifteen.
And then Tellie
suddenly realized that the speed of the water was getting swifter because it
was going into a river.
“Errance!” she
gasped. “I can’t swim!”
Then the current sucked her off her feet. Her body was pulled out the exit, bringing her shoulder into sharp contact with a wall. She was in the river, shards of light slashing across her vision. Thrashing her arms and legs against the raging water, she searched for the surface. Bubbles exploded in front of her eyes, and she gasped, drawing in water. Choking, she fought to find air. Her hand broke the surface, but a current of the river sucked her down deeper. Needles began to prick behind her eyes. Her head throbbed.
Then the current sucked her off her feet. Her body was pulled out the exit, bringing her shoulder into sharp contact with a wall. She was in the river, shards of light slashing across her vision. Thrashing her arms and legs against the raging water, she searched for the surface. Bubbles exploded in front of her eyes, and she gasped, drawing in water. Choking, she fought to find air. Her hand broke the surface, but a current of the river sucked her down deeper. Needles began to prick behind her eyes. Her head throbbed.
Ayahwei! she silently screamed. Please! Please!
Suddenly, her hair
was pulled taunt and her body was jerked back against the current. An arm
clamped around her waist, and she felt herself surge to the top. Her head burst
out of the water, and she instantly drew in shrill gasps of air.
Next thing she
knew, the upper half of her body was sprawled over the thick branch of a tree,
and she was violently choking up water. Her legs were still in the river being
pulled hard, but she was no longer at the mercy of it. She looked around
her, squinting at the harsh beauty of daylight. She was on the branch of a
tree that had fallen into the river. Errance was slumped over a branch near
her, and Kelm was closet to the bank. The bank rose steeply upon either side of
the water, and trees hung precariously out over it, their roots often sticking
out of the soil. To her left, the canyon side rose up higher then she could see
and blended into a mountain range. The bank Kelm was near was much lower, and a
forest spread out from it as far as she could see.
She stared at Errance,
who hadn’t moved. His back was turned away from her, his dark hair was spread
out over his glistening skin. But in between the strands of his hair, she could
see raw stripes of lacerated flesh.
“Errance?” she
croaked. He…he was the one that had pulled her out of the river. “Are you
alive?”
He shifted his arm
ever so slightly across the log.
“I’m alive, if you’re interested,” Kelm
called. He pulled himself up on to the top of the log with several grunts. “I
thought I was a goner, but then I smacked into this tree.” He crawled along the
top of the trunk down to where she was and extended a hand.
She grabbed it and was able to scramble up out of the water. They started up
the bank on their hands and knees and had reached the ground, before Tellie
realized that Errance still hadn’t moved. “Errance? Are you coming?” she
called.
Over the roar of
the river, she couldn’t hear him, but she saw his arms strain and he pulled
himself up onto the trunk.
Satisfied, Tellie
turned and looked into the forest. It was far thicker then Shadowshade, and the
leaves were broad and flat, cutting out any view of the sky. Vines and bushes
choked the earth and trees. She squinted up at the sky above them and saw that
the sun hovered directly overhead. It was mid-day. How long had it been since
she had entered Tertorem? A few days? A week? Forever?
Kelm was beside
her, and she unexpectedly heard him whisper the exact same swear word Errance
had used earlier. Blood rushing up into her face, she turned on him with every
intention of giving him a severe tongue lashing.
But when she
turned, she saw Errance, and all words failed her.
He stood upon the
bank, swaying, his face tilted as he stared at the sky and the trees, his face
filled with undisguised wonder and uncertainty, water shining off his skin and
hair like silk. In many ways it should have been a beautiful picture. But that
was all ruined by the sight of his affliction.
The wounds were
similar to those Tellie had seen as scars, but these were fresh and that made
them all the more horrible. But upon his chest was something she had not seen
before. Something that must have come at the hand of the Voice.
Burnt black upon
his chest were the words Property Of,
and below it was a strange symbol; a black ball clasped by a skeletal hand, a
symbol she could only assume meant His Darkness. The words were emblazoned with
enflamed flesh, both yellow and red.
He was cradling his right arm, which twisted in such a cruel manner that
Tellie knew it was broken. An arm that had grabbed either her hair or her waist,
saving her life.
Shakily, she
leaned against a tree, her legs finding it hard to support her. How could
anyone mark a person like an…an animal?
Errance’s gaze
flicked down to them abruptly as if he had felt their stares on him, and his
face went inexplicably cold. He started forward into the trees. “Come,” he
said, in an emotionless tone.“They’re looking for us by now.”
2 comments:
It is amazing. I want to know more!
Even though this is just a short glimpse, I feel drawn to the characters.
Thank you for sharing Hannah, and keep writing!
Thank you, Rebekah!
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